Wednesday 17 February 2016

The Dark Danger

This is one of the recent stories I wrote in my book and I decided to write it on my blog.
Sometime at the start of Autumn, Daniel was called to Driforia to help investigate a destroyed ship in space the others found. When he arrived, Dr. Buckley explained about how he saw the ship in space while he was looking at the monitor of their ship. They all went to their ship and flew off to find the destroyed one. When they found it, it was split in half. They flew closer towards it.
Dr. Buckley: "O.K everyone, get ready to go on it. Try to find as many survivors as you can. I'll monitor all of you and communicate anyone for information and tell me and everyone else if you've found someone or something. Alright?"
Everyone: "Yes sir."
Dr. Buckley: "Alright. Go."
All the Dangers flew out to the destroyed ship. When they went inside, it was dark so they all turned on their night vision mode on their helmets. Dr. Buckley was monitoring them. As they separated and went in different directions, they couldn't find a body anywhere. However there were speakers all around them. They sometimes saw some walls and they used their swords to cut through them and go into the next room. Just then, Chloe went into a room and when she did, something in there began to move. She tried to see what it was but it moved too fast. She spoke to Dr. Buckley.
Chloe: "Uh, Doctor."
Dr. Buckley: "Yes Chloe."
Chloe: "I'm in a room and I think there's something alive in here."
Dr. Buckley: "Try to look around."
Chloe: "I'm trying. But it keeps moving too... wait, what the? AAAGGGHHH."
???: "RRROOOAAARRR."
Chloe: "..."
Dr. Buckley: "CHLOE? WHAT'S WRONG? WHAT'S GOING ON?"
Chloe: "..."
The monitor showing Chloe went off.
Dr. Buckley: "Oh, no. EVERYONE, LISTEN. CHLOE'S IN TROUBLE. YOU'VE GOT TO HELP HER."
Luke: "What? NO."
Luke went off to find her.
Troy: "Luke, wait."
Luke ignored him. The speakers around them turned on and someone spoke.
???: "Ha-ha-ha. If you want your friend back, come to the top of the ship. I'll be waiting."
They turned off.
Luke: "YOU GIVE CHLOE BACK."
???: "..."
Luke: "Grr. DARN YOU."
Everyone began to head to the top of the ship. Luke was the first to get there. It was dark.
Luke: "Chloe? You in here?"
???: "You won't find her."
Luke: "Who are you? Show yourself."
???: "As you wish."
The mysterious person got out a blade. He dashed towards Luke. He quickly began cutting and slashing. Luke screamed in pain. Everyone, except Daniel and Zane, arrived. They couldn't see Luke or anywhere even with their night vision mode on.
Bella: "Chloe? Luke? Where are you?"
???: "Ha-ha. Attack."
Immediately, they could hear hundreds of thing coming towards them. With their night vision  mode, they could see what was coming.
Owen: "What are those things?"
They fought them as best they could, but they were eventually injured and captured. Daniel and Zane finally arrived and when they did, lights came on. At the end of the room, sitting on a chair was a person wearing black and white clothes and a helmet. Daniel and Zane looked at him with open eyes.
???: "So we meet at last, the legendary Daniel Danger."
Daniel: "Who are you and how do you know who I am?"
The person stood up and slowly walked towards him talking.
???: "From what I've been hearing about out you always helping people, of course I know who you are. And my name is "Batoc." It is truly an honour to meet you personally ."
Zane: "Cut the act. Where are out friends?"
Batoc: "Of course. Where are my manners? Reunions are important."
He pushed a button and a bit of the floor opened where a huge metal stand with glass covering it came up and everyone else was in it including the Dangers and the passengers. Everyone was injured.
Stephanie, Bella, Luke and Owen: "DANIEL, ZANE."
Daniel and Zane ran over to it.
Daniel and Zane: "GUYS, NO."
Their teleporters and weapons were taken off them and their helmets
Batoc: "I hope you had a good chat Daniel because you and I are going to have a talk of our own."
He pushed the button again and it lowered again. Daniel and Zane were banging on the glass but it didn't crack. As it went to the bottom and the floor went back to normal, Daniel and Zane kneeled down and put their hands on the ground. They eyed the floor. Batoc clapped his hands and hundred of robots with guns and blades came up on platforms.
Batoc: "Now Daniel, I'm afraid I'm going to have to have these robots kill you now. Ha-ha-ha."
Daniel: "You... hurt... our... FRIENDS."
Daniel stood up furiously and looked at Batoc with anger. He gritted his teeth. As he got even madder, his costume began to change colour from blue and red to black. The black "D" on his chest turned white. He clenched his fists.

Zane looked at him in shock.
Zane: "Oh my god. DOCTOR? WHAT'S GOING ON WITH DANIEL?"
Dr. Buckley: "It's the power of the Dark Danger."
Zane: "THE WHAT?"
Dr. Buckley: "It from the pill he ate after the Danger Games. Whenever someone eats it, they gain another power deep inside them called the Dark Danger. It emerges whenever the Danger who takes it gets too angry. It was an accident that happened when the pills were first being created many years ago."
In the blink of an eye, Daniel vanished for a millisecond then when he reappeared all the robots exploded. There was black smoke. As it cleared, Batoc could see Daniel walking towards him. Batoc was a bout to draw his own blade but then Daniel waved his hand and the sword shattered. Zane saw him grabbing Batoc and attacking him in absolute rage.
Zane: "Doctor? We've got to do something about Daniel. If this keeps going, Daniel might kill him."
Dr. Buckley: "..."
Zane: "Doctor? CAN YOU HEAR ME?"
Dr. Buckley wasn't on the ship. Zane watched as Daniel was tossing Batoc around and pounding him with fury. With every step, Daniel was cracking the ground. He slammed Batoc into the ground which made his helmet crack. He then threw him against the window. When he fell to the ground, Daniel stood on his throat. Daniel raised his sword.
Dark Daniel: "DIE."
???: "NNNOOO."
Daniel turned his head and saw Dr. Buckley with the others and the passengers. Dr. Buckley had saved them and he was wearing his own silver coloured Danger suit with his own sword.
Daniel: "Guys?"
As he calmed down, his costume began to return to normal and he took a few steps back. Batoc got up and tried to run off but Dr. Buckley stood in front of him to stop him. Bella and Troy grabbed him and pulled him away. Everyone looked at Daniel who had passed out. Owen and Luke picked him up and everyone teleported to the Danger's ship. They also brought the passengers. Bella and Troy put Batoc into a cell. Owen and Luke put Daniel onto a bed in the medical room and Stephanie sat next to him. Thy then took off and brought the passengers back to their home planet.
Passenger 1: "Thank you for helping us. How can we ever repay you?"
Dr. Buckley: " Don't mention it. It's our job."
Passenger 2: "By the way, tell that kid that we hope he gets better soon."
Dr. Buckley: "Daniel? Yeah, sure."
The Dangers went back into the ship and went back to Driforia. When they got there, they put Batoc in jail and Daniel woke-up. Stephanie was still sitting next to him
Stephanie: "Are you alright?"
Daniel looked at her and sat up. He rubbed his head.
Daniel: "(Sigh.) Yeah."
Stephanie: "What happened back there?"
Daniel: "I got angry that that guy hurt all of you and apparently when I got angry, I turned into that Dark thing."
Stephanie: "You were angry that he hurt us?"
Daniel: "Yeah. My friends mean the most to me. Even though I'm not your boyfriend, we're still friends."
Stephanie smiled. Daniel got up and they both went out of the ship. Dr. Buckley walked over to him.
Dr. Buckley: "Hey Daniel. Are you O.K?"
Daniel: "Yeah. I feel a little weird from that power, but I'm fine."
Dr. Buckley: "I'm sorry for not telling you about that Dark power."
Daniel: "Forget about it."
Dr. Buckley nodded.
Daniel: "I better go home."
Dr. Buckley: "Have a safe trip back."
Daniel: "Thanks."
Daniel teleported back to Youghal. Dr. Buckley looked down and sighed. Far away though, the creature who was looking at Daniel before when he was fighting Upside was looking at him again. He was in the shadows.
???: "So, that young Danger has unlocked the power of the Dark Danger. He's getting stronger everyday. But he'll never reach my power."

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